Week #9 100WC Katie Scriven

9/11/2017

Ghosts Out Shopping

Once on a dark eerie night I was walking home from a late night with my friends. The streets of Barcelona seemed different. Suddenly I heard a sound. I peeped around the corner. I saw something misty in the shape of a human. I realised it was a ghost with shopping bags. I ran for my life. Was it a ghost or was I just seeing things? I gave my glasses a wipe. I heard the sound again I definitely wasn’t imagining that. I turned the corner again. They were still there. One had spotted me and closed in quick.

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Miss T link

11/11/2017 12:37:40 pm

Hi Katie,
What a well written piece this week, I am glad I have been asked to read it. You have kept closely to your story line whilst adding a few extra details to make it more interesting, such as 'I gave my glasses a wipe.'
Thank you for sharing this
Miss T Team 100wc
Hampshire, England

Esther link

12/11/2017 12:23:16 pm

Very good story Katie. I like the way your story was set in a foreign city and the suspense at the end. Keep up the good work.

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