Week #5 Marie O'Keeffe

21/10/2017

As hurricane Ophelia was hitting are shores on Monday morning, people were getting everything organised, with high winds forecast when I was watching the news. Once the storm had passed, we all went down to the river. There were wellies in the water. It looked like a person was under water and the wellies were up over the water.

What a weird sight it was. I really didn't know what to make of it. Nobody else seemed to notice so I just didn't say a word. But I took a photo and then tried to think of what might have happened other than the worst...

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Mrs. Peterson

23/10/2017 08:09:18 pm

Hi Marie,
Hurricanes definitely leave evidence of their power - things that are not normal! The details and thought you write from observing the scene are very realistic. Your ending leaves some hopeful thoughts. Well done!

Mrs. Peterson (Team 100wc)
Texas, USA

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