I was in Disney land with my family. We were on the last ride of the day. It was a haunted house ride. Half way through the ride my brother pushed me. I fell over the side of the cart. The ride was going so fast that no one could save me. As the door slammed, I knew my family were finished the ride. A few seconds later I heard the loud speaker .The park was closed and I was there for the night.
I am in Disney land and I am scared for my life. This is what happened.
I was in Disney land with my family. We were on the last ride of the day. It was a haunted house ride. Half way through the ride my brother pushed me. I fell over the side of the cart. The ride was going so fast that no one could save me. As the door slammed, I knew my family were finished the ride. A few seconds later I heard the loud speaker .The park was closed and I was there for the night.
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Ms. Tighe
26/10/2017 01:19:13 pm
A great suspense story Andrew! Well done!
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