100WC Week #11 Marie O'Keeffe

23/11/2017

My Walk through the Woods

It was Saturday afternoon. It was a fabulous day. My friends and I just finish a lovely 99 cone. We started walking back to the entrance to meet our parents.

All of a sudden the sky turned black. The air turned cold. And right in front of us, there was a black rope covering someone or something.

We were stunned with what we saw in front. We turned around. We looked around to see if anyone was near us to help us. There was a noise that made us turn rapidly. There was nobody there.

The black rope that was on that person that we had saw was now just there, lying on the ground.

2 Comments

Anna

23/11/2017 01:37:27 pm

Hi Marie. I like your story because your description and vocabulary is very good it reminds me of the dementers in Harry Potter I wonder what will happen next. Bye Anna

Mrs Dolton (Team 100)

27/11/2017 12:04:50 am

Hi Marie,

I enjoyed reading your exciting story. You have used short sentences really effectively - 'The air turned cold' makes the reader feel like they are in the woods with you.

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