100WC- Orla B

13/5/2020

With a sense of foreboding and trepidation, I entered the unwelcoming, unilluminated cave. I was trembling from the numbing cold combined with the dampness in the stagnant air. There was an eerie silence as I wandered into the unknown. The inhabitants of the cave slept with folded wings, wrapping themselves in a veil of darkness.

The stillness of the night was suddenly interrupted, and the deafening screams echoed through the cold night. At the corner of my eye, I observed a supernatural apparition. With a surge of adrenaline, I fled the cave in fear for my life, never to return.

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13/5/2020 12:02:43 pm

Just phenomenal work, Orla! Each week, your writing is showing even greater skill and depth... how you create atmosphere, build tension, develop the visual details and bring the plot to a cresendo! The vocabulary is so rich, allowing the writing to have a dramatic tone. I just love the phrases in this, such as 'sense of foreboding and trepidation' and 'The inhabitants of the cave slept with folded wings'. Fantastic writing Orla, I know how hard you have worked on this and you nailed it!
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