100WC- Orla B

27/4/2020

As the moon arose there was an eerie silence.
Lilly ambled through the forest while watching her step. As the tale went “If you dare explore the forest at night, you will never return”. While Lilly was climbing under a bow of a tree she leaped to the sound of a bloodcurdling howl.Without thought, she hastened back to her home as fast as possible where she knew she was safe. She lay in bed in shock. Not knowing what to do, she tucked herself under the covers.
And my god, she would never return to the forest AGAIN!

5 Comments

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27/4/2020 12:48:46 pm

Very impressive story Orla! You hooked me from your first sentence... the structure of it and the word 'eerie'! Love that word! And your fantastic vocabulary continued... 'ambled, dare, bloodcurdling, hastened, tucked; It built the story beautifully! Your sentence structures set the pace for the reader and the varying between long and short sentences really conveyed the character's emotions. A fantastic narrative Orla. Well done!
Ms. Tighe

Ella

27/4/2020 04:08:21 pm

Hey Orla.
Wow your story is so cool! I really liked it. You used some real good description.
-Ella from New Zealand ☺

Eimear

29/4/2020 07:34:49 am

Great story Órla I really enjoyed reading it💞

Charlie Ryan

2/5/2020 03:14:52 am

Well down Órla great story!!!!!

Mrswills1

3/5/2020 02:31:49 am

I enjoyed reading your response to this week’s prompt Orla. Your precise choice of vocabulary is a strength of your text, as is your accurate punctuation. I am nominating your writing for the special showcase this week. Well done!

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