100WC- Matthew H

21/4/2020

I was sitting on a bench in the sun when a man came down the road.

As he passed, he fired a kick at me. Instinctively I jumped out of the way but I'd fallen down a hole. I immediately thought of something and I said "that belt makes you look fat" but the stranger just said "well it doesn't matter what you think, does it" as he threw a big red sign with a flower on it at me. I threw dirt at him as he ran away. I pushed the sign off myself and ran after him.

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Carina Tighe link

21/4/2020 06:38:22 am

A super first story Matthew! A seemingly innocent start and then 'boom!' the language changed to 'fired', 'instinctively' and 'immediately'. Then with length of that next sentence with direct speech pulls the reader through the exchange of words. Very effective to demonstrate the heightened feelings of the characters! You have left the reader wondering what happened next, I am curious! You are a great writer, keep up the good work!
Ms. Tighe

Matthew H link

22/4/2020 02:57:46 am

Thank you 😊. I’m glad you liked it. It was a great 👍 experience for me and I’ll definitely write a sequel. (Your welcome) I love the challenge and I encourage everyone to try it 😺 and good luck if you do. Bye for now -Matthew

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Welcome to Ms. Tighe's
100 word challenge Blog! Scroll down to
log post 14/06/2020 to see how to complete the challenge!

Each week a prompt is given, which can be a picture or a series of individual words and the children can use up to 100 words to write a creative piece..

So this class blog is only the beginning of our stories' adventures. Children from all over the world can read and comment on our stories! Google 100 Word Challenge to see the associated website.

The prompt changes each week so we encourage you to return often to read our stories!

100WC- Matthew H

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