100WC- Madeline K 5th

29/5/2020

One day , Sophie and Anna were going for a walk . They were walking cassually, then they found a lottery ticket on the ground! Anna gasped " imagine if this was the winning ticket "?! Sophie said "I hope it is !" Anna said "me too". They continued to walk . Then they found out was the ticket even real..........?!

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29/5/2020 12:57:22 pm

Well Madeline! I think there is not one person on his earth who hasn't dreamt of winning the lotto! It was lovely that you had two friends in this story and I wonder if they remained friends after the win, as the experience of many lotto winners isn't always as we might expect! I think they do remain friends and stay very grounded! What would you do with a lotto win?! Well done on doing the 100WC, Madeline!
Ms. Tighe

Mrs P (Team 100WC)

31/5/2020 11:37:42 pm

Hi Madeline
It would certainly be interesting to find a lottery ticket. Describing the girls as "walking casually" really builds a picture of what they were doing. I also loved that you used "gasped" rather than said. It is certainly much more interesting to read! Wonderful work on this 100WC
Mrs P (Team 100WC)
Wellington, New Zealand

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