100WC Kieran Carter

1/3/2020

As it began to rain, I sought shelter among the trees.

In the distance, I saw an old cottage. When I got there, I crept up the creaky steps of the cottage. I was curious! My heart raced as I rang the door bell. I got no answer. My hand shook as I turned the door knob. So I had a little peep in. It seemed uninhabited with cobwebs in every nook and cranny. I went in quietly and turned on the lights. When they started flickering, my eyes widened in shock! With a shriek, I sprinted straight out the door.

I swore never to go back there again.

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2/3/2020 01:59:38 pm

Good job Kieran!
My favourite thing about your story is your use of the skill 'show, don't tell'. I knew you were nervous when your heart was racing when you rang the doorbell. I knew your were scared when you turned the door knob. I would have been too!
Well done Kieran!

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