There was a dog called Twig who like to eat twigs off a tree. One day, Twig tired from eating twigs, decided to swim in the lake. Twig was having a nice time swimming but then a fish called Tiko popped up and said " I don't want your fleas in my lake! " Twig and Tiko started to argue for a while. A bear called Gerald came along and tried to sneak up and eat them. Twig and Tiko teamed up to defeat the giant hungry bear. Gerald ran off. They were so happy about beating Gerald, that they threw a party. All the woodland creatures were invited to it except Gerald the bear.
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What a cracking first 100WC. Joshua! I found it so entertaining and loved the power struggle between Twig and Tiko only for them to team up against a stronger enemy! And even they were surprised at their success! It was an excellent use of the prompt photo and so imaginative! I could see this becoming a cartoon series for Netflix, so many creative ideas of Twig and Tiko having arguments over lots of things and yet coming together in the face of dangers in the woodlands. Think you can feel my enthusiasm for your story!! Well done, Joshua!
James
31/5/2020 02:44:26 am
That was a great story. The development of Twig and Tiko really helped me picture the story you were telling, although I would like to know a bit more about Gerald and how they defeated him. What I really want to know though is does Twig only eat twigs from that specific tree or from trees in general? I hope you write more stories about Twig and Tiko. I think they could have some interesting adventures. Your comment will be posted after it is approved.
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