One night there was a wolf howling at the yellow moon because he had dropped his pizza slice. The wolf out of anger attacked the tree that an owl was sleeping in. The owl annoyed, started fighting the wolf in a ferocious battle that lasted about 30 seconds because they were tired. That night, they started to sleepwalk and fell off a cliff. As they were falling, they did a backflip but luckily fell into a cactus. Since they had magic for their feathers it didn’t hurt them. They went off together to find a pizza that had five hot, golden cheeses on.
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A rollercoaster of a story, Joshua! You have a really unique style of writing and one that really intrigues me! This story would make a terrific picture book with wild illustrations of the 'ferocious' battle between the wolf and the owl! I love the contrast of the atmosphere at the start with the howling wolf and the end with the pair content with the extraordinary pizza! I would encourage you to have someone read your work for punctuation to add a final polish. A super story with great appeal for children and adults! Well done, Joshua! Your comment will be posted after it is approved.
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