100WC Jake Kelly

1/3/2020

When my friends dared me enter an old run-down cabin, I did not want to seem like a wuss!

So I boldly pressed the old doorbell. With no answer, I opened the door. It creaked open. My heart was pounding as I switched on the lights. They just flickered uncontrollably then fizzed out! Someone pounced on me from behind! I spun around to shake them off and sprinted for the door. Another person blocked my way. A torch was flicked on and laughter filled the cabin.

It was only then I realized that it was my friends playing a prank on me. My cheeks went on fire! I was mortified!

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2/3/2020 01:51:53 pm

Your story had me on the edge of my seat, Jake!
It is very well written, with many words describing the cabin, helping the reader visualize the scene. The words used to describe sounds and movement really bring the story to life. Super!

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