100WC- Emma

7/2/2020

It was a day I always dreamed of, I was counting down the days to my wedding! My friends and I went to get all our dresses. Mine was lovely and sweet! It was one in a million.
The next day was the day of my wedding. We were all getting ready in my house. My bridesmaid was just buttoning up my dress when I spilt coffee all over it. I was so upset and just burst into tears! We went to the wedding dress shop. Although it was Saturday it was not opened!
I remembered that my grandmother had a similar dress from when she was young… so I could get married after all!

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9/2/2020 12:39:21 pm

A great opening 'hook' to your story. I could imagine the scene in the house as everyone was so looking forward to the day... and then disaster strikes! Your story was so well written, very impressive! Well done!

Amy

10/2/2020 06:24:35 am

I feel bad for you but next time be more careful

Amy

10/2/2020 06:31:13 am

very good Emma I feel bad ☹️ for you be more careful next time

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