It was a cold dreary day by the lake. Mary was stuck at home and felt the urgency to go somewhere, so Mary decided to bring her dog down to the lake. It was very relaxing as Mary heard the sound of the wintry water crash of the rocks, it was a very windy day. Recently Mary had felt out of it a little bit but hearing such a comforting sound of the water helped her come back to reality. Mary had felt alone, so she made a promise to herself that every day she would come and listen to the water.
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Caoimhe F
26/5/2020 02:53:55 pm
Eimear I really enjoyed the little story and I was just imagining all of the sounds it was really nice
Wow Eimear! What a mature piece of writing! Your phrase 'the sound of the wintry water crash off the rocks' evoked the same feeling in me that Mary realises by the end of the story, that a connection with nature is so important for our mental well-being! Having a favourite place to retreat to and rejuvenate our energy and thinking in this frantic world is what we have all learnt over the past few weeks. A super piece of writing, it really connected with me! Well done, Eimear! Your comment will be posted after it is approved.
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