As the mighty animals of the wild gathered for the coronation of the new king of the jungle. Although the lion was not happy about this, all the animals agreed it was the best decision. The animals had two weeks to prepare a speech to convince the animals. It was the day, all of the animals spoke separately and as soon as everyone had spoken they all placed their vote. Just as they thought the vote was over an elephant who they had never seen before appeared, he had been listening to their speeches, then the elephant delivered his winning speech the animals were inspired by his bravery and he was the new king of the jungle!
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An inspiring story, Eimear! I loved the characters of your animals, behaving like people (and perhaps even more civilised than people!). You give the animals mature behaviour... coronation of their king, agreement on ways to make decisions, voting for a leader, persuasive speech writing, and the calculated appearance of a 'dark horse'! I loved the phrase 'inspired by his bravery'. It was the climax of the energetic atmosphere and a terrific way to end your story! This story demonstrates your talent as a writer. Well done, Eimear! Your comment will be posted after it is approved.
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