Hundreds of years ago viola was lost and over the past years people had searched for it but no one had ever come close to finding it. I decided to search for it but I was a step ahead of everyone else. I had an ancient map I found the previous year. With this advantage I started our search at the castle. I followed the map to the old church graveyard. I noticed an odd headstone so I started investigating. I looked under a flower pot where I found a key, there was a keyhole on the headstone and I opened it although I didn’t find a viola we found gold!!
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Well done Eimear! For me, it is some of the phrases that elevate this from good story to great story! '...no one had ever come close..', '... I was a step ahead of everyone else'... and 'With this advantage...' It showed your development and progress from just writing to say what happened... to an engaging storyteller. Looking back over your stories Eimear, you demonstrate different writing skills in different stories which is great to see and shows the great potential that you have! Such an enjoyable story, Eimear!
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Máire O'Keeffe
14/6/2020 03:25:19 am
Hi Eimear
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