100WC- Donnacha C

10/2/2020

"It is SO slow", Peter whined "I want to get my fresh trim!" Billy the barber was taking forever. The queue was going out of the shopping center. Mum was coming to pick me up in an hour. I would never get there so I decided to go to the other barbers. Timmy the trimmer. I walked over to the barber and Timmy was waiting for someone to come in. I walked in and Timmy asked what I wanted done on my head. So he shaved all my hair off. I learned my lesson never go to the wrong barber.

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Ms Tighe

10/2/2020 08:26:55 am

There is nothing worse than been stuck in a queue with no progress! I know exactly how Peter felt so I really enjoyed the story!!
I think all that was missing from the story was to rephrase the final sentence e.g. Doh! Well that taught me that sometimes you get what you might expect from a rushed job! Well done Donnacha!

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