100WC- Danny Dreeling

31/1/2020

One day, I had a project to do with Tom on the late 1800s. We began by researching life in over 100 years ago. We said we would look at images. We saw a picture of a horse and carriage so we clicked on the picture and all of a sudden the laptop started to shake!! It sucked us into the screen and we found ourselves back in 1894 in a horse and carriage!!
We started to panic but Tom spotted another horse so decided to race it against it with our horse. We counted down 3,2,1… and we took off but it was so slow!!
I got angry and pulled the reigns off and as quick as lightning we were back at our computer.
Thank God I’m in 2020!!

2 Comments

Ms Tighe

3/2/2020 01:13:09 pm

A great use of the prompt and you had me interested from the start! Great use of imagery.. 'the laptop started to shake' and great use of vocabulary.. 'It sucked us...' I could hear the noise and energy in the room! Well done Danny D!

David Dylan B

10/2/2020 06:37:12 am

I enjoyed your story because of the imagenation in going back in time and the end Thank god I’m in 2020.

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