100WC- Chloe Pitt

31/1/2020

My horse and I entered a race that we had been training for for a long time. When we arrived, we were waiting for the race to start. We were ready to go to the start but it was so slow I nearly lost my mind. When the race did start, we lost by a lot! I was furious! I gave the horse water and loaded him into the trailer.
I went home and rested and then put him in the back field. I went to bed because I wasn’t happy with the performance. I was so determined that we would train really hard for the next race!

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3/2/2020 01:57:24 pm

I felt a great connection with your story Chloe P! It made me reflect on a time where I had little success with something I had trained for and had to dig deep and try again. Your story showed me your strong character and how you don't let a little set back get in the way of success. Well done Chloe!

Janet Team100WC

4/2/2020 03:32:10 pm

I felt your frustration when I read your story Chloe. You described all that waiting and disappointment very clearly and I really liked your positive ending, showing you are determined to work hard and succeed in the future.

Nicole

10/2/2020 06:24:33 am

I liked it because l loved your expression fabulous story well done chloe p

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