100WC- Chloe L

25/4/2020

One day a girl went to school dressed as a goblin, yes you heard that right a goblin.
All day she was getting dirty looks and was getting bullied. She really thought the goblin costume was brilliant, she had painted herself green and dyed her hair rainbow coloured, she had a pink tutu with orange streamers coming out the back. She didn’t understand why everyone was being so mean, it was dress up day wasn’t it?
OH NO dress up day was tomorrow!
Well it doesn't matter what you think, does it?

2 Comments

Ms Tighe link

25/4/2020 02:25:43 pm

Delighted you took on the 100WC Chloe! I felt you would have rocked the goblin look, it was as if your voice really shone through in your writing! You created a great visual image of the character and the 'Well it doesn't matter what you think, does it?' really fitted her outgoing nature! Keep up the good work!
Ms. Tighe

Mrs MooreTeam 100London link

26/4/2020 11:47:46 am

Hi Chloe, What a marvellous read! You made excellent use of the narrator’s voice to draw me into your writing writing and what a fabulous choice of costume. I can imagine just how you would’ve felt getting dress- up day wrong. Keep up the great work. Mrs MooreTeam 100London

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