100WC- Caoimhe F

7/5/2020

One night a little girl named Lucy lay awake on her bed. She couldn`t get to sleep. The full moon was out she was home with her older sister who was asleep. Lucy decided to go outside to try calm herself down because she was a bit scared. Lucy disappeared in seconds and had no idea where she was. Her sister woke up and realised Lucy was gone. Lucy was jumping up and down when she figured she was inside the moon she kept on jumping and just fell through. She told her sister what happened but no one else.

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7/5/2020 05:34:43 am

Another great story Caoimhe! You did a great job in drawing the reader into the story with setting the story 'the full moon' and with the main character. The stand out moment of this story was the burst of the imagination 'when she figured she was inside the moon'! Well done Caoimhe!
Ms. Tighe

Team Gaelscoil Chilldara

11/5/2020 04:20:04 am

Hi Caoimhe,
What great imagination you have shown in your 100WC, you really lead the reader into thinking this was going to be a simple story of a sleepless night only to surprise them with that very imaginative twist of Lucy being inside the moon which was also a great use of the prompt.
Keep up the amazing writing Caoimhe.

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