Days went by searching for the gold Max wanted to give up but something was telling him not to gi. He searched looking for the lost ancient gold worth millions. But the what Max really wanted was the ancient viola that was out there somewhere it was worth billions! and it was a beautiful instrument . After a few more weeks of searching for the gold and viola someone told Max he wasn’t the only person searching for the ancient items many more were. That really pressurised him. Max found the viola in the end but five other men found gold.
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A tricky five word prompt Caoimhe but you have created a terrific 100WC! I loved how you built up the importance of the viola... worth not just millions but billions! You created more tension again with the added detail of others searching in competition for the viola and the gold. I was glad Max had found it... even though you don't tell us much about Max, I never felt he was greedy! I was rooting for Max as he had been so determined and had persevered!
Mrs P (Team 100WC)
15/6/2020 11:24:47 pm
Hi Caoimhe Your comment will be posted after it is approved.
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