100WC- Anna G 3rd

6/6/2020

Walking to the shop for ice-cream a car pulled up beside me and a friendly looking man asked “Do you know where the nearest garage is?”. “Straight out this road on the left” I replied. “Want a lift?” he offered. I was enjoying my walk so I declined. “Jump in and I’ll buy you some sweets to say thanks” he said. This made me uncomfortable so I began to walk away. But the car drove slowly along beside me and the now not-so-friendly man was beginning to scare me. That’s when I knew I should run and I did. I ran to my friend’s house just across the road where I was safe.

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Ms Tighe link

6/6/2020 01:02:57 pm

Wow Anna... you had my heart racing and a not so nice, anxious, feeling grew as I read. Yet writing should do that sometimes.. make the reader uncomfortable. It is also a vital role of writers to educate the reader on important decision making skills. It was definitely time to run and not to be concerned with anything else. A brilliant story Anna. Well done!
Ms Tighe

Sandrine (WC100 team)

7/6/2020 04:30:12 am

What a story! A lot of suspense but what a great story and a great message at the end.

Anna Graham

11/6/2020 12:11:32 pm

Thank you.

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