100WC #18 Marie O'Keeffe

20/1/2018

WAS IT REAL?

Do you ever imagine something but you don’t think it’s real.

Well today I was walking down a very busy street when I heard a really weird sound coming from the highest building in town .I noticed the weirdest thing ever I thought it sounded bad but this was the worst thing I have ever seen in my whole entire life.
I saw a massive thick finger with half of the wrist cut off! The fingers started to move! I was amazed! What was I supposed to do? I shouted “What is that!” everyone stared at me. I point up to but was there 10 seconds ago was now nowhere to be seen?

1 Comment

Mariah

25/1/2018 04:22:42 pm

Hi Marie,

Well done on a great 100 Word Challenge!
I think I'd be doubting my senses too if I saw such a hand on top of a building!
I thought your use of short sentences and rhetorical questions were very powerful. My only suggestion would be to try and remember to include punctuation on these, for example putting a question mark after your second sentence.
Keep up the great work Marie!

- Mariah (Team 100WC)
Edinburgh, UK

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