100 Word Challenge- Philip M

12/3/2020

On a summer night, me and my friend Johnny were going to a house he found in the woods a while ago. Off we went to the forest, the forest is out in the country side.

We finally got there. The house was all broken all over the structure, the windows were all shattered and vines were all over the house. We went up to the doorbell and gave it a ring. There was no answer so I rang it again.

In a flash the door spun right open. Johnny and I walked in shaking with fear and there was a huge man with a cloak and a cowboy hat. He was sharpening his knife. We ran as quick as a cheetah out of the forest and never went there again

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Ms Tighe

12/3/2020 02:53:56 pm

I really enjoyed your story Philip! You skillfully helped the reader to create images in their mind. I liked your use of the simile 'as fast as a cheetah' and the use of 'shaking with fear'. Good work!

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