100 Word Challenge- Eoghan Phelan

22/1/2020

I thought this day would go better.

Yesterday I got a new bike. It was red and I thought it was very cool so I went to school on it this morning.
I went up to Big Barry and said “My bike is so cool! I can even down wheelies on it”.
But when I did a wheelie, I fell over and everybody laughed.
Then Barry got my bike, tied it on the tree and said “the bike can wheelie itself and you can’t!”

Dying of embarrassment, I said “At least it isn’t bright yellow".
He sniggered, took a can of spray paint from his bag, and spray painted it bright yellow.

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22/1/2020 12:56:21 pm

What a great story! I particularly enjoyed the two characters 'Big Barry' and the boy. It felt as if the childish way of showing off was to get Big Barry's attention... and it backfired!
I loved how you created the image of the wheelie and then later tied it in with the image in the photo of the yellow bike upright in a 'wheelie' position... very clever! A brilliantly creative piece, well done Eoghan!

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