One day after school, I settled down to do my homework as usual. There was a knock on the door so I tiptoed downstairs to answer it. To my surprise no one was there so I just continued my homework. As the door slammed, I knew someone was in the house. It couldn’t be my mam, dad or sister because they were away so who could it be? I was petrified. Out from under the coat stand came A CAT?! One that I’d often see roaming around .I was so glad it was only a cat.
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Ms. Tighe
4/11/2017 04:08:44 am
Well done Rachel! Your writing had plenty for the reader to visualise. We have all been in that situation of a noise creating fear when in the house alone, only for it to be something completely normal. Well done! Your comment will be posted after it is approved.
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