100 WC Katie Scriven

26/10/2017

The Haunted House

Last Halloween, I went trick or treating with my friends. Everyone gave us yummy treats. I said we’d go to one more house. I knocked on the dilapidated blue door. “Trick or treat!” we all shouted. “Go away,” an old man said. As the door slammed, I knew something was up, I decided to investigate. Next day, I tiptoed into his yard and looked through the dirty window. He was in there washing dishes. I swiftly ducked my head. Suddenly I heard something behind me, it was a ghost! I got up and sprinted down the lane. Now I know why everyone says that house is haunted.

3 Comments

Ms. Tighe

26/10/2017 01:14:16 pm

Wow Katie! Your use of engaging vocabulary made this a very enjoyable read. Very impressive to be so concise with a complete story!

Emma

6/11/2017 01:44:56 am

Hi Katie, I enjoyed reading our spooky story. You had some good vocab, such as dilapidated. Next time you could try using different senses in your description such as smell, sound, and touch, to help create atmosphere in your story. It was a great Halloween read. Keep up the great work.

Melanie, Auckland, New Zealand

14/11/2017 11:57:30 am

Hi Katie
I really enjoyed your story this week. It was very well structured so you were able to pack a lot of action into your story. On top of that, you included lots of great descriptive words and your spelling was excellent too. I would love to know how you knew it was a ghost - what did it look like? Did it walk or was it hovering? Was there a weird smell? Keep up the great writing Katie!

From, Melanie, Team 100wc

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