100 WC- Eva Hennessy

7/2/2020

It was raining outside on Friday, my favorite day of the week. But the rain started to get worse as time went passed. I was getting worried. My father told me school was off today. I was happy but worried. Although it was Friday, nothing was opened. I was worried that mother would be mad at me for not getting her a gift as it was her birthday. So I went to my friends’ house because she had a shop in her shed. I found flowers in her shop so I took them home and surprised my mother!

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9/2/2020 12:26:20 pm

Your plans to get your mother a birthday present were scuppered by the weather! You came up with a good solution to your problem and saved the day! I really enjoyed your story Eva, a great piece of writing!

Jackie Cameron

10/2/2020 12:11:32 am

Eva, I am impressed with the fact that you persevered with finding a gift for your mother's birthday. She would have appreciated you going to so much trouble.
You might like to research the words passed and past. I wonder if you have used the correct one? You could also have resolved this by leaving the word 'went' out of the sentence.... 'as time passed'.
Thanks for sharing this week.
Jackie (Team 100WC)
New Zealand

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