100 WC- Danny G

18/3/2020

“I hope you haven’t damaged that laptop” shouted my Mam as I bent down to see the how many pieces I had to retrieve.

“It was really heavy and I was carrying too much” I replied, hoping I wouldn’t get into too much trouble. Then I jumped as I heard a giggle behind me. “What’s she up to?” I thought and then I saw it! A banana skin! Had I been scammed? My little sister wouldn’t get away with this! I got my Dad’s black pellet gun and she scampered like a terrified rat.

I will get my revenge, just you wait and see!

3 Comments

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18/3/2020 03:25:24 pm

I am in stitches laughing at your story Danny! A terrific use of the words in the prompt, a plot that packs a punch and a writing style that makes the reader feel they are right in the room with you (while keeping social distancing rules, of course!). You have a great flair for writing and have set the standard so high! Well done!!!
Ms T

Oran McCullagh

19/3/2020 02:31:06 am

I thought that this was very funny Danny well done.

Heidi (Team 100WC, New Zealand)

22/3/2020 02:23:47 pm

Kia ora Danny. I also found your story hilarious! Great use of dialogue within the piece, and I especially like your final sentence! Well done, and keep rising to the 100 Word Challenge.

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Each week a prompt is given, which can be a picture or a series of individual words and the children can use up to 100 words to write a creative piece..

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